Comments on: Hell on $5 a Day - Chapter 11

By: Greg Bulmash

Greg Bulmash — Thu, 15 Jan 2009 04:18:08 +0000

@walker: Thanks for catching the error. Fixed.

By: walker

walker — Thu, 15 Jan 2009 03:30:24 +0000

"He waqsn't such a city boy that he'd never been out in the woods, and these weren't woods. They were way too clean and way too orderly." More spelling errors. I can't wait for more chapters

By: Rhan

Rhan — Tue, 13 Jan 2009 13:52:53 +0000

True. It might remove the more virtuous characters from the action for a while, though.

By: Greg Bulmash

Greg Bulmash — Tue, 13 Jan 2009 00:39:35 +0000

@Rhan: Much of the story takes place in the afterlife. So, even if I "knocked off" a living character, that wouldn't necessarily knock them out of the story.

By: Rhan

Rhan — Mon, 12 Jan 2009 22:29:52 +0000

Ah, so that isn't a spoiler for him getting knocked off. Glad to hear it.

By: Greg Bulmash

Greg Bulmash — Mon, 12 Jan 2009 05:58:35 +0000

@Rhan: The summary says two men, but that's because Kurt and Alain are the major characters. George is sort of "along for the ride" rather than being on the trip.

By: Rhan

Rhan — Sun, 11 Jan 2009 23:56:15 +0000

Always nice to find a new chapter up! I wasn't expecting George to be so young, for some reason, and doesn't the summary say only 2 men? Anyway, I look forward to tomorrow.