Comments on: Hell on $5 a Day - Chapter 13

By: bullfinch

bullfinch — Fri, 16 Jan 2009 20:11:56 +0000

Dammit Vinnie! This storyline is getting good!

By: Greg Bulmash

Greg Bulmash — Fri, 16 Jan 2009 05:37:40 +0000

@Miladysa: I put "[To Be Continued January 19, 2008]" at the end of the chapter... Oh, that's a year ago. Well, like you didn't write 2008 on any of your checks this year.

And it's fixed. The magic of the Interwebs strikes again!

By: Greg Bulmash

Greg Bulmash — Thu, 15 Jan 2009 22:09:54 +0000

@Rhan: This is just the first 10 shops along one of many very long streets. You gotta figure that there are going to be a whole lot of storefront houses of worship attended by people who now know without a doubt that God exists and there is an afterlife. Might seem it's a bit of closing the barn door after the horse is gone, but it's human nature.

By: Miladysa

Miladysa — Thu, 15 Jan 2009 21:18:27 +0000

Great chapter

Now... where's the next? ;D

By: Rhan

Rhan — Thu, 15 Jan 2009 20:48:58 +0000

Hope the kid lets you get some sleep and get your health back, but this is still pretty dang good. I love that there's a revivalist church in Hell.

By: wit

wit — Thu, 15 Jan 2009 12:31:13 +0000

Ahh, don't worry my friend. Follow-up edits are par for the course. It happens even with the smallest of writings (even comic strips *gasp*!)

By: Greg Bulmash

Greg Bulmash — Thu, 15 Jan 2009 08:10:53 +0000

If you read this when it published at midnight central time, you got a version that still needed a copy edit. Due to some personal medical issues today and the baby deciding that sleeping 4-5 hours at a go really wasn't his style, but 30-90 minute naps with lots of soothing in between would be his modus operandi, I didn't get to the serious proofreading run on this until about an hour after it went live.

Sorry.

- Greg