Comments on: Hell on $5 a Day - Chapter 16

By: Tina

Tina — Wed, 28 Jan 2009 14:54:05 +0000

Lol, Vampire In Perdition. Awesome novel, awesome new chapter. I was fascinated right away, even if the summary seemed a bit lacking (I didn't expect the chapters detailing Alain's military service, just straight... vampire in love, vampire loses love, vampire goes to hell to be able to go to heaven to find his love. It was a pleasant surprise). All in all, great work. I may not comment every time you update, but I'll be here, in front of the screen, reading and enjoying.

By: Greg Bulmash

Greg Bulmash — Wed, 28 Jan 2009 07:35:17 +0000

@Rhan: Thanks. Fixed.

By: Kelly

Kelly — Wed, 28 Jan 2009 01:17:06 +0000

cool. Very cool.
I'm still reading. Which is good.

By: Rhan

Rhan — Tue, 27 Jan 2009 21:11:29 +0000

Just a grammar thing: in the last sentence of the third paragraph, there ought to be a comma between head and which.

By: Greg Bulmash

Greg Bulmash — Mon, 26 Jan 2009 11:08:00 +0000

@Karr: Thanks. Fixed. On a side note, this popped into my head and I figured I'd share. When Vinnie says "V.I.P." to the bouncer demon, it could mean "Vampire in Perdition". It's 3 in the morning, isn't it?

By: Karr

Karr — Mon, 26 Jan 2009 10:35:39 +0000

There is an "oc" in there that should be an "of"...