Comments on: Hell on $5 a Day - Chapter 21

By: daymon

daymon — Wed, 18 Feb 2009 20:28:53 +0000

And I like the ending line: "Then we're off to see the wizard," Alain said and pulled the lever.

That's one way to say you are in for some interesting times. Almost to the last level of hell, just a little further to go.

By: Kelly

Kelly — Tue, 17 Feb 2009 02:55:54 +0000

...still reading.
good work.

By: El Donaldo

El Donaldo — Thu, 12 Feb 2009 19:41:31 +0000

I haven't left any comments on your story because usually I just read it when it is emailed to me. But today I knew the next installment was out and I didn't want to wait for the email to arrive.

I have enjoyed everything up to this point, and am interested in what angle you are taking with Kurt. Needless to say I will be looking forward to the 16th.

By: Miladysa

Miladysa — Thu, 12 Feb 2009 12:00:47 +0000

Excellent

Something I noticed: "so interested them"