Comments on: Hell on $5 a Day - Chapter 33 http://www.brainhandles.com/hell-on-5/hell-on-5-a-day-chapter-33-2 Whatever's tugging at my brain handles Tue, 27 Dec 2011 19:46:46 +0000 hourly 1 By: Liz http://www.brainhandles.com/hell-on-5/hell-on-5-a-day-chapter-33-2/comment-page-1#comment-8230 Liz Wed, 25 Mar 2009 20:47:12 +0000 http://www.brainhandles.com/?p=1295#comment-8230 Wow, this story is so great! :D As for Deuce, I didn't even realize that! That's pretty clever. :) Wow, this story is so great! :D As for Deuce, I didn't even realize that! That's pretty clever. :)

]]> By: SA Kid http://www.brainhandles.com/hell-on-5/hell-on-5-a-day-chapter-33-2/comment-page-1#comment-8221 SA Kid Tue, 24 Mar 2009 20:06:07 +0000 http://www.brainhandles.com/?p=1295#comment-8221 As always, awesome. As always, awesome.

]]> By: Greg Bulmash http://www.brainhandles.com/hell-on-5/hell-on-5-a-day-chapter-33-2/comment-page-1#comment-8217 Greg Bulmash Tue, 24 Mar 2009 00:08:36 +0000 http://www.brainhandles.com/?p=1295#comment-8217 No tomato surprise coming up. I'll eventually explain why Kurt is able to do what he does, but it's no plot twist that turns the story on its ear. As for Kurt becoming a "deus ex machina", I believe there's already a character with that name, or something that sounds suspiciously close to it. The plot line of Alain going to the 7th ring and recruiting a raiding party was one of the later plot elements I added. As Kurt made his way through Purgatory and beyond, I realized that just leaving Alain in a hospital bed to remain a passive participant wasn't fair to Alain or the readers. His soul is on the line. He deserves a chance to fight for it a bit more. I came up with the idea of him getting some violent souls from the 7th ring and making trouble to create a distraction. But Alain was busted up, powers revoked, and laying in a hospital bed. I was thinking "I need a deus ex machina to get Alain out of the hospital," and thus Deuce X. MacKenna was born. But even if God does eventually step out of a box and perform some miracles, history has shown that God never makes it easy for the mortals he chooses as His instruments. No tomato surprise coming up. I'll eventually explain why Kurt is able to do what he does, but it's no plot twist that turns the story on its ear. As for Kurt becoming a "deus ex machina", I believe there's already a character with that name, or something that sounds suspiciously close to it.

The plot line of Alain going to the 7th ring and recruiting a raiding party was one of the later plot elements I added. As Kurt made his way through Purgatory and beyond, I realized that just leaving Alain in a hospital bed to remain a passive participant wasn't fair to Alain or the readers. His soul is on the line. He deserves a chance to fight for it a bit more.

I came up with the idea of him getting some violent souls from the 7th ring and making trouble to create a distraction. But Alain was busted up, powers revoked, and laying in a hospital bed. I was thinking "I need a deus ex machina to get Alain out of the hospital," and thus Deuce X. MacKenna was born.

But even if God does eventually step out of a box and perform some miracles, history has shown that God never makes it easy for the mortals he chooses as His instruments.

]]> By: Stephen M (ethesis) http://www.brainhandles.com/hell-on-5/hell-on-5-a-day-chapter-33-2/comment-page-1#comment-8215 Stephen M (ethesis) Mon, 23 Mar 2009 23:16:10 +0000 http://www.brainhandles.com/?p=1295#comment-8215 I am hopeful that Kurt doesn't turn into an unjustified deus ex machina or a tomato surprise. But I've been enjoying the series. I am hopeful that Kurt doesn't turn into an unjustified deus ex machina or a tomato surprise.

But I've been enjoying the series.

]]> By: daymon http://www.brainhandles.com/hell-on-5/hell-on-5-a-day-chapter-33-2/comment-page-1#comment-8214 daymon Mon, 23 Mar 2009 22:21:57 +0000 http://www.brainhandles.com/?p=1295#comment-8214 Yeah I think it Kurt showed up at the gate with a rating of 9.4, that would have taken him all the way to the top. Not to mention got who ever was in-charge of keeping an eye on all the saints in trouble for missing him. And the two angels fighting over who is messanger is, was quite funny. Yeah I think it Kurt showed up at the gate with a rating of 9.4, that would have taken him all the way to the top. Not to mention got who ever was in-charge of keeping an eye on all the saints in trouble for missing him.
And the two angels fighting over who is messanger is, was quite funny.

]]> By: Miladysa http://www.brainhandles.com/hell-on-5/hell-on-5-a-day-chapter-33-2/comment-page-1#comment-8212 Miladysa Mon, 23 Mar 2009 13:44:45 +0000 http://www.brainhandles.com/?p=1295#comment-8212 WOW! Gobsmaked ;D Thank Heaven Nybras was saved and as for Deuce - well - he's a character worthy of his own book :D I can't wait to read about the adventures of Alain and the 10 guys - I just know it's going to be good! WOW! Gobsmaked ;D

Thank Heaven Nybras was saved and as for Deuce - well - he's a character worthy of his own book :D

I can't wait to read about the adventures of Alain and the 10 guys - I just know it's going to be good!

]]> By: Kelly http://www.brainhandles.com/hell-on-5/hell-on-5-a-day-chapter-33-2/comment-page-1#comment-8208 Kelly Mon, 23 Mar 2009 06:17:27 +0000 http://www.brainhandles.com/?p=1295#comment-8208 Who is it? Who is it? WHO??? Who is it? Who is it?
WHO???

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