Comments on: Hell on $5 a Day - Chapter 9

By: Greg Bulmash

Greg Bulmash — Thu, 15 Jan 2009 04:17:08 +0000

@Walker: I appreciate you catching errors, but this is not one. This wording was very specifically chosen.

By: walker

walker — Thu, 15 Jan 2009 03:07:08 +0000

In the last sentence of the 5th paragraph,
"but that was the approved wording from on high."
I think it would be better as "wording from up high" or "from above"

Other than that great job and keep it up.

By: Greg Bulmash

Greg Bulmash — Sun, 04 Jan 2009 04:22:47 +0000

@Julie: It's my second. The first was written as my senior thesis project in college and has only ever been read by me and my advising professor on the project. I may pull it out, dust it off, and give it a well-deserved rewrite if this experiment goes well. Thanks for reading.

By: Julie

Julie — Sat, 03 Jan 2009 23:19:48 +0000

I just found this story last night, and am really enjoying it (and I'm not even a teenage boy -- but my son is, and he's going to start reading it tonight).
Is this your first novel?

By: Kelly

Kelly — Thu, 01 Jan 2009 22:29:21 +0000

omg vampire sex.
So, then, I'm guessing that Alain is a 80 something year old vampire by now? And anyone want to bet that Kurt just got picked up by some hot vampire chicks?
Still enjoying it. Here's to hoping that we're past the prolouge, or however its spelt, and into the meat of the story.
And Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you Greg!